martes, 12 de noviembre de 2013

An embarrasing experience.


Last Saturday, I went with my friends to the disco. In this disco there were a
lot of people so we went to an other disco. The music was fantastic and we danced
all the song. There weren´t many people and we stayed there all night until we took
the bus to go home.
Before going home, while we were dancing, one friend saw my mum in the disco and
she told me about it. I couldn´t believe it! It was too embarrasing. My mum
approached to me and said hello because she had seen me too. When all my friends saw
the scene they started to laugh. That was the most embarrasing experience of my life.

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